works cited

Blythe, Nils. “Mumbai’s slum life poses world problems.” BBC News Online. 29 Sept 2011. <http://news.bbc.co.uk/>.

Eaves, Elisabeth. “Two Billion Slum Dwellers.” 6 Nov. 2006. 29 Sept. 2011. <http://www.forbes.com/>.

Fink, Sheri. “Cities of the Poor I: Life in the Slums (Kenya).” Public Radio International: The World. 29 Sept. 2011. <http://www.theworld.org/>.

“Urbanization.” World Geography: Understanding a Changing World. 29 Sept. 2011. <http://worldgeography.abc-clio.com/>.

rough draft

Some people all over the world live very poorly and do not have food or even a place to live or even sleep. Slums are a row of poorly constructed houses. Slums have a negative effect on human populations because they have very little sanitation, the water is contaminated and there are a lot of diseases. Slums have a negative effect on human population because they have very little sanitation.

Slums have a negative effect on human population because the water is contaminated. There is a sewage that invades most of the places and when it gets big it floods the houses, causing the water to go in. "And you can smell. And few steps into Kibera, we encounter brown-green water flowing through an open ditch,"said Fink. Ongera added,"That's the sewage. Now it's passing throug the slum.""And their facades are marked by a water line. The polluted stream sometimes overflows them. While sewage from outside Kiberia flows into the slum, the sewage from inside never leaves,"concluded Fink. What they mean is that the sewage goes into the slums and floods their houses. And that the sewage from inside the slums never leave. The sewage that goes in the slums contaminate and flood their houses and leaves a mark outside the house. Slums have a negative effect on human population because there is little sanitation.

Slums have a negative effect on human population because there is little sanitation. They do not have sanitation systems like a restroom and nasty water contaminates their food and water. "What she wants me to see is the key challenge of her life in Kibera:basic sanitation. Like the vast majority of kiberia residents, Musanga and her family have no toilet. They used to make do by sneaking into a nearby outhouse that belongs to someone else. Sanitation systems are nearby absent,"said Fink. What he is trying to say is that the sanitation is bad, so like people have no toilets they have to find a place to do their business. Slums have a negative effect on human population because they get a lot of diseases.

Slums have a negative effect on human population because they get a lot of diseases. Because the water is contaminated people get diseases from there. "Human waste leaches into the water people drink and cantaminates the food they eat. it carries typhoid and other diseases that can be deadly, especially to young children,"said Fink. He is trying to say that the water they drink is contaminated. The water that they drink has diseases causing people and children to get sick. Concluding this slums have a negative effect on human population because their water is cantaminated,they have very little sanitation and lastly thay get a lot of diseases.

Some people all over the world live very poorly and do not have food or even a place to live or sleep.  Slums have a negative effect on human population because they have very little sanitation, the water is contaminated and there are a lot of diseases.  There is very little sanitation, the water is contaminated and they get a lot of diseases.  How do other people feel about those who live there when they have to go to the restroom, and they do not have one.  When the slums get flooded all the waste goes in and they have to clean it out.

final draft

Some people all over the world live very poorly and do not have food or even a place to live or even sleep. Slums are a row of poorly constructed houses. Slums have a negative effect on human populations because they have very little sanitation, the water is contaminated and there are a lot of diseases. Slums have a negative effect on human population because they have very little sanitation.

Slums have a negative effect on human population because the water is contaminated. There is a sewage that invades most of the places and when it gets big it floods the houses, causing the water to go in. "And you can smell. And few steps into Kibera, we encounter brown-green water flowing through an open ditch,"said Fink. Ongera added,"That's the sewage. Now it's passing throug the slum.""And their facades are marked by a water line. The polluted stream sometimes overflows them. While sewage from outside Kiberia flows into the slum, the sewage from inside never leaves,"concluded Fink. What they mean is that the sewage goes into the slums and floods their houses. And that the sewage from inside the slums never leave. The sewage that goes in the slums contaminate and flood their houses and leaves a mark outside the house. Slums have a negative effect on human population because there is little sanitation.

Slums have a negative effect on human population because there is little sanitation. They do not have sanitation systems like a restroom and nasty water contaminates their food and water. "What she wants me to see is the key challenge of her life in Kibera:basic sanitation. Like the vast majority of kiberia residents, Musanga and her family have no toilet. They used to make do by sneaking into a nearby outhouse that belongs to someone else. Sanitation systems are nearby absent,"said Fink. What he is trying to say is that the sanitation is bad, so like people have no toilets they have to find a place to do their business. Slums have a negative effect on human population because they get a lot of diseases.

Slums have a negative effect on human population because they get a lot of diseases. Because the water is contaminated people get diseases from there. "Human waste leaches into the water people drink and cantaminates the food they eat. it carries typhoid and other diseases that can be deadly, especially to young children,"said Fink. He is trying to say that the water they drink is contaminated. The water that they drink has diseases causing people and children to get sick. Concluding this slums have a negative effect on human population because their water is cantaminated,they have very little sanitation and lastly thay get a lot of diseases.

Some people all over the world live very poorly and do not have food or even a place to live or sleep.  Slums have a negative effect on human population because they have very little sanitation, the water is contaminated and there are a lot of diseases.  There is very little sanitation, the water is contaminated and they get a lot of diseases.  How do other people feel about those who live there when they have to go to the restroom, and they do not have one.  When the slums get flooded all the waste goes in and they have to clean it out.

introduction paragraph

Slums have a negative effect on human population because the water is contaminated. There is a sewage that invades most of the places and when it gets big it floods the houses, causing the water to go in. "And you can smell. And few steps into Kibera, we encounter brown-green water flowing through an open ditch,"said Fink. Ongera added,"That's the sewage. Now it's passing throug the slum.""And their facades are marked by a water line. The polluted stream sometimes overflows them. While sewage from outside Kiberia flows into the slum, the sewage from inside never leaves,"concluded Fink. What they mean is that the sewage goes into the slums and floods their houses. And that the sewage from inside the slums never leave. The sewage that goes in the slums contaminate and flood their houses and leaves a mark outside the house. Slums have a negative effect on human population because there is little sanitation.

thesis

Some people all over the world live very poorly and do not have food or even a place to live or even sleep. Slums are a row of poorly constructed houses. Slums have a negative effect on human populations because they have very little sanitation, the water is contaminated and there are a lot of diseases. Slums have a negative effect on human population because they have very little sanitation.

outline

Some people all over the world live very poorly and do not have food or even a place to live or even sleep. Slums are a row of poorly constructed houses. Slums have a negative effect on human populations because they have very little sanitation, the water is contaminated and there are a lot of diseases. Slums have a negative effect on human population because they have very little sanitation.

Slums have a negative effect on human population because the water is contaminated. There is a sewage that invades most of the places and when it gets big it floods the houses, causing the water to go in. "And you can smell. And few steps into Kibera, we encounter brown-green water flowing through an open ditch,"said Fink. Ongera added,"That's the sewage. Now it's passing throug the slum.""And their facades are marked by a water line. The polluted stream sometimes overflows them. While sewage from outside Kiberia flows into the slum, the sewage from inside never leaves,"concluded Fink. What they mean is that the sewage goes into the slums and floods their houses. And that the sewage from inside the slums never leave. The sewage that goes in the slums contaminate and flood their houses and leaves a mark outside the house. Slums have a negative effect on human population because there is little sanitation.

Slums have a negative effect on human population because there is little sanitation. They do not have sanitation systems like a restroom and nasty water contaminates their food and water. "What she wants me to see is the key challenge of her life in Kibera:basic sanitation. Like the vast majority of kiberia residents, Musanga and her family have no toilet. They used to make do by sneaking into a nearby outhouse that belongs to someone else. Sanitation systems are nearby absent,"said Fink. What he is trying to say is that the sanitation is bad, so like people have no toilets they have to find a place to do their business. Slums have a negative effect on human population because they get a lot of diseases.

Slums have a negative effect on human population because they get a lot of diseases. Because the water is contaminated people get diseases from there. "Human waste leaches into the water people drink and cantaminates the food they eat. it carries typhoid and other diseases that can be deadly, especially to young children,"said Fink. He is trying to say that the water they drink is contaminated. The water that they drink has diseases causing people and children to get sick. Concluding this slums have a negative effect on human population because their water is cantaminated,they have very little sanitation and lastly thay get a lot of diseases.

Some people all over the world live very poorly and do not have food or even a place to live or sleep.  Slums have a negative effect on human population because they have very little sanitation, the water is contaminated and there are a lot of diseases.  There is very little sanitation, the water is contaminated and they get a lot of diseases.  How do other people feel about those who live there when they have to go to the restroom, and they do not have one.  When the slums get flooded all the waste goes in and they have to clean it out.

Outline

I.         Introduction

A.     some people all over the world live very poorly and do not have a place to live....

B.     a slum is a row of houses that are poorly constructed....

C.     slums have a negative effect on human population....

D.    slums have a negative effect on human population because....

II.         Defendable Point #1

A.     slums have a negative effect on human population because....

B.      there is a sewage that invades most of the places and when it....

                                      i.     "and you can smell. and few....

                                     ii.     what they mean is that the sewage goes into the slums and....

C.     the sewage that goes in the slums contaminate and floods their houses....

D.    slums have a negative effect on human population....

III.         Defendable Point #2

A.    slums have a negative effect on human population.... 

B.    they do not have sanitation systems like a restroom.... 

                                      i.  "what she wants me to see is the key....   

                                     ii.  what he is trying to say is that the sanitation is bad....     

C.  the effect of no toilets causes them to go to the restroom outside and....     

D.  slums have a negative effect on human population because they....    

IV.         Defendable Point #3

A.     slums have a negative effect on human population because....

B.     because the water is contaminated people get diseases from there....

                                  i.     "human waste leaches into the water people drink and contaminates the food....

                                     ii.     he is trying to say that the water they drink...

C.   the water that they drink has diseases causing people and....

D.    concluding this slums have a negative effect on humans....

V.         Conclusion

A.    some people all over the world live very poorly and do not have food....

B.     slums have a negative effect on human population because they have....

C.     there is very little sanitation, the water is contaminated....

D.    how do other people feel about those people that have to live....